I'm bummed right now. This book has so much potential and it's all ruined because the two main characters/love interests (it's painfully obvious that this will happen) are ridiculously immature in their speech.
Their brief conversation was so awkward and clunky it was cringe-worthy to read. I've heard 13yr olds who were smoother.
Such a shame the rest of it sounded good and the killer is bound to try and go after Kara, which is exciting. But how am I suppose to enjoy a story where the main characters are so painful to read?