25pg - love how the main male character is gay. I was a little worried about a love-triangle. Or the 2 females girls battling it out over him. Speaking of which there's a female friendship here and it appears to be great!! none of that catty business you usually see in a lot of UF.
38pg - Yes stay a few mins longer and say goodbye to your possessions when you know people are coming to get you...... If this doesn't bite her in the ass I will be surprised.