Not sure how I feel about the start. I'm somewhat intrigued by the critters but Bryanna's reaction to everything is very blazay, its not what I would consider a normal reaction under the circumstances.
First someone who seems to have webbed fingers and look like a seal threatens her father. Bryanna's response is to stair out the windows and daydream? Then she see's something that has a reddish-brown lion mane, and no nose, this creature also waves at her and all she does is cover her face?
If i was her, my next step would have been to the psych ward for sure.