10% - This Menar guy is a pretty big douche-bag. He's extremely childish and selfish.
damn i hate it when the main character is unlikable.
13% - The sentence structure is written strangely. it constantly seems like the person who is reacting is the person who said the sentence.
"you'll see. We're almost there as a matter of fact. Menar looked at the different....' this is a less obvious one. i know Menar didnt say this but with the way its written in can come off like he did.